Post by Triss and family on Jan 19, 2009 18:11:22 GMT -5
I would like to join as three off my characters. I have already made them up, and we are a family even though we are not all the same species. The different characters are separated by a huge space.
Name: Triss Song
Age: 15 seasons
Gender: Female
Species: Mouse
Marital Status: Too young
Position and Home: She cares for all her younger siblings. She lives in a hollowed out tree in the outskirts of Mossflower.
Strengths: She loves her family, and is good in sticky situations.
Weaknesses: She is shy, and afraid of other people.
She is pretty unsocial, but tries her best.
Alignment: Good
Appearance: she dresses modestly. She wears a cream dress with a light blue apron over it. She wears a light purple headband. She is a brown mouse.
Personality: She is shy, but loves her family. She is pretty over protective of her younger brother Rollo Timbalisto.
History: She was born as a slave to a small group of vermin. A fire killed all the slaves but her and her brother. She recieved a small scar on the palm of her hand that is barely noticable. She traveled about a bit until one day she ment Gracie Hilt, a runaway from Salamandastron. The trio settled down and live together in a hollowed out tree.
Codeword Martin the Warrior
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Name: Rollo Timbalisto
Age: 8 seasons
Gender: Male
Species: Mouse
Marital Status: Too young
Position and Home: He is a warrior at heart, but is still to young to go off on his own. He lives with his older sister Triss Song
Strengths: He is willing to risk it all for freedom, and for a good meal.
Weaknesses: He is very afraid of fire. At night he sleeps as far away from the fire as possible.
Alignment: Good
Appearance: He wears a brown habbit at the insistance of his older sister Triss Song.He is a gray mouse with one brown fleck on his underbelly.
Personality: He is small, but will do anything for his family and for food. He is loving, but is not very patient.
History: He was born as a slave to a small group of vermin. In the fire, he came out fine, but afterwards suffered breathing problems meaning he couldn't run far. He was the one who actually spotted Gracie Hilt, and invited her to travel with them.
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Name: Gracie Hilt
Age: 11 seasons
Gender: Female
Species: Hare
Marital Status: Too young
Position and Home: She is a good cook, and usually prepares most of the food in her home in the hollow tree. She lives with Triss Song and Rollo Timbalisto.
Strengths: She is amazing with a bow and arrow and is a very social creature. She is a very fast runner.
Weaknesses: She cannot weild a sword to save her life, and is plagued by the fact of it. Her dreams of being a runner in the Long Patrol were crushed by this fact.
Alignment: Good
Appearance: She wears a red smock and a straw sunhat. She is a gray hare, and it is said she is related to Basil Stag hare very distantly.
Personality: She is a pure bred fighter, but refuses to believe it. The way she thinks about herself is horrible because she cannot weild a sword. She is one of the most compassionate people, and will led a paw at any time.
History: She lived at Salamandastron, but was teased endlessly because of her disability to wield a sword. She left Salamandastron and was going to go to Redwall when she met up with Triss Song and Rollo Timbalisto. She now lives with them, and is planning a return trip to Salamandastron to seek out her mother, who when she left her was burdened with child.
Global Mod notes: I've sorted it out for you, and I've made some grammar and spelling alterations. Please remember to not use acronyms for names and to be literate. Other than that, accepted.
Name: Triss Song
Age: 15 seasons
Gender: Female
Species: Mouse
Marital Status: Too young
Position and Home: She cares for all her younger siblings. She lives in a hollowed out tree in the outskirts of Mossflower.
Strengths: She loves her family, and is good in sticky situations.
Weaknesses: She is shy, and afraid of other people.
She is pretty unsocial, but tries her best.
Alignment: Good
Appearance: she dresses modestly. She wears a cream dress with a light blue apron over it. She wears a light purple headband. She is a brown mouse.
Personality: She is shy, but loves her family. She is pretty over protective of her younger brother Rollo Timbalisto.
History: She was born as a slave to a small group of vermin. A fire killed all the slaves but her and her brother. She recieved a small scar on the palm of her hand that is barely noticable. She traveled about a bit until one day she ment Gracie Hilt, a runaway from Salamandastron. The trio settled down and live together in a hollowed out tree.
Codeword Martin the Warrior
~~~
Name: Rollo Timbalisto
Age: 8 seasons
Gender: Male
Species: Mouse
Marital Status: Too young
Position and Home: He is a warrior at heart, but is still to young to go off on his own. He lives with his older sister Triss Song
Strengths: He is willing to risk it all for freedom, and for a good meal.
Weaknesses: He is very afraid of fire. At night he sleeps as far away from the fire as possible.
Alignment: Good
Appearance: He wears a brown habbit at the insistance of his older sister Triss Song.He is a gray mouse with one brown fleck on his underbelly.
Personality: He is small, but will do anything for his family and for food. He is loving, but is not very patient.
History: He was born as a slave to a small group of vermin. In the fire, he came out fine, but afterwards suffered breathing problems meaning he couldn't run far. He was the one who actually spotted Gracie Hilt, and invited her to travel with them.
~~~
Name: Gracie Hilt
Age: 11 seasons
Gender: Female
Species: Hare
Marital Status: Too young
Position and Home: She is a good cook, and usually prepares most of the food in her home in the hollow tree. She lives with Triss Song and Rollo Timbalisto.
Strengths: She is amazing with a bow and arrow and is a very social creature. She is a very fast runner.
Weaknesses: She cannot weild a sword to save her life, and is plagued by the fact of it. Her dreams of being a runner in the Long Patrol were crushed by this fact.
Alignment: Good
Appearance: She wears a red smock and a straw sunhat. She is a gray hare, and it is said she is related to Basil Stag hare very distantly.
Personality: She is a pure bred fighter, but refuses to believe it. The way she thinks about herself is horrible because she cannot weild a sword. She is one of the most compassionate people, and will led a paw at any time.
History: She lived at Salamandastron, but was teased endlessly because of her disability to wield a sword. She left Salamandastron and was going to go to Redwall when she met up with Triss Song and Rollo Timbalisto. She now lives with them, and is planning a return trip to Salamandastron to seek out her mother, who when she left her was burdened with child.
Global Mod notes: I've sorted it out for you, and I've made some grammar and spelling alterations. Please remember to not use acronyms for names and to be literate. Other than that, accepted.
